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-**Norsk Urskog** is a volunteer based project aiming to support and promote young Norwegian underground bands within the metal genre and this is done via its website, the social media and a CD sampler distributed at the [Inferno Metal Festival][1] in Oslo, Norway - and possibly at other festivals where Inferno is present.
+**Norsk Urskog** is a volunteer based project aiming to support and promote young Norwegian underground bands within the metal genre. We achieve this via the [website][2], social media and a CD sampler which we distribute at the [Inferno Metal Festival][1] in Oslo, Norway - and possibly at other festivals where Inferno is present.
 
-The main goal is to showcase the participating bands to an international audience, giving the less known quality music a chance to be heard by a wide variety of people and allowing them to discover new favorites from all over Norway. We want to offer the hard working bands an opportunity to be heard, judged and, as much as possible, seen - since Norsk Urskog's
-collaboration with Inferno Festival also involves an own scene for concerts where selected bands from each release are given an opportunity to perform live.
+The main goal is to showcase the participating bands to an international audience, fans and professionals alike. We want to give the lesser known bands in the Norwegian scene an opportunity to be noticed, heard and seen. Through the Inferno Metal Festival we reach a wide variety of fans, promoters and people in the business, and we hope we can help them to discover new favorites from all over Norway.
 
-The volunteers behind the project are handling the logistic aspects such as CD creation, printing, covers, dialogues with various entities, website, promos, while the bands interested in participating in this project have as responsability to fill in a form, submit it and then just compose and finalize the songs that they have subscribed for.
+Through the collaboration with the Inferno Festival we also stage a concert where we present a select bands from the release to a live audience.
 
-Currently you can have a look at how the previous Norsk Urskog samples looked like at this page. You can contact us via email at this address, should you have any questions, and if you're interesting in having your song on the 2016 edition of Norsk Urskog, read the terms and condition and submit the form here.
+The volunteers behind the project are handling the logistic aspects such as CD creation, printing, covers, dialogues with various entities, website, promos, etc.
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+To participate in the next release, bands will have to fill out our online registration form (coming soon,) and provide a CD quality copy of the participating track either as a download or by physical copy.
 
 [1]: http://infernofestival.net
+[2]: http://norsk-urskog.no