Merge branch '3.4RC'3.4

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diff --git a/doc/tutorials/personal_channel.html b/doc/tutorials/personal_channel.html
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+++ b/doc/tutorials/personal_channel.html
@@ -13,8 +13,11 @@ to a personal channel in a natural way.</p>
 <p>Enter your name and a nickname for the channel address, and select a "role". 
 Typically if this is a personal channel that represents you, select a <strong>Social</strong> role 
 with a level of default privacy that you are comfortable with. If you are unsure, 
-select <strong>Social - Restricted</strong>.</p>
+select <strong>Social - Mostly public</strong> which allows easy interaction and provides privacy when you need it.
+Alternatively, <strong>Social - Restricted</strong> is very popular among privacy advocates, though it may require a bit more
+effort to meet people. Whichever setting you choose can be changed later if you decide you require more or less privacy than what is provided.</p>
 
+<!-- This section no longer applicable
 <h3 id="Configure_your_channel_features">Configure your channel features</h3>
 
 <p>When your new channel is created you are directed to the channel settings page. 
@@ -26,17 +29,13 @@ enable various features. Remember to press the Submit button when you are done w
 your selections.</p>
 
 <p><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/3656a67dce40a1fc2515e9089217f2e136d4fcf8babe77bac00ecaad43ce.png" alt="image"><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/4aaaf1e124514c8d6999a5fe1d07be5af460cda4ba6cde9106ebc1564bb0.png" alt="image"><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/99a6efda4df631dfb2d2a849412044cc6a0f8aebeac289d28786f2649d24.png" alt="image"><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/e5d5674a34e848e2cce90a60fc416415271d9c51b81ad2a950fb0157222a.png" alt="image"></p>
+-->
 
 <h3 id="Add_a_profile_photo">Add a profile photo</h3>
 
-<p>Navigate to your channel home by clicking the "Home" icon on the left side of the 
-navbar, and then select the <strong>About</strong> tab to view your profile.</p>
+<p>When your new channel is created, you will be directed to a page determined by your site admin. By default this is the <strong>Edit Profile</strong> page.
 
-<p>Press the <strong>Edit</strong> button on the right to edit your profile information.</p>
-                                                           
-<p><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/2243e48ccea25bd907cce3dbd6fc9f7cd832a4c91a4c5dd294b7b219e7d8.png" alt="image"></p>
-
-<p>From the <strong>Profile Tools</strong> dropdown menu, select the <strong>Change profile photo</strong></p>
+<p>From the <strong>Profile Tools</strong> dropdown menu, select <strong>Change profile photo</strong> (or just click the profile photo).</p>
 
 <p><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/31f42a02bdbae095e0329db6c3814e2975979aff12f873f43d81724c5e61.png" alt="image"></p>
 
@@ -44,7 +43,7 @@ navbar, and then select the <strong>About</strong> tab to view your profile.</p>
 
 <p><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/458a842c2ea0fbe3b7869bb14dfffe1e5be098d1cd6e590bbead25b4cc05.png" alt="image"></p>
 
-<p>When you press <strong>Submit</strong> you will be redirected back to the profile editor. 
+<p>When you press <strong>Done Editing</strong> you will be redirected back to the profile editor. 
 (You might need to clear your browser cache if you have trouble seeing the new photo.)</p>
 
 <p><img class="img-responsive" src="/help/tutorials/assets/d080e92d797af5e863fa39b2084c16a8410de1f7a6559633435817444aef.png" alt="image"></p>