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@@ -24,17 +24,17 @@ are straight-forward and simple, because we know that relationships rarely are
 buddies or potential employers, you can rest assured that each is only able to 
 see the side of you that you wish to present. 
 
-A single instance of Mistpark Server supports up to several hundred people 
-using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these people can connect with any 
-other supported network anywhere in the world and share photos, links, 
-status updates, whatever. 
-
-But maybe you don't want to be connected to the world. That's OK too. Mistpark 
-may also be closed off from the global community and used to support
+A single instance of Mistpark Server can easily support hundreds of (and up to
+several thousand) people using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these 
+people are able to connect with potentially hundreds or thousands of friends 
+and associates on any other supported network anywhere in the world and share 
+photos, links, status updates, etc. 
+
+But maybe you don't want to be connected to the world... That's OK too. 
+Mistpark may also be closed off from the global community and used to support
 social networking amongst corporate, educational, religious, and other private
 communities. This makes it an excellent choice for the social networking needs
-of young teenagers. Their network can grow to global scope as their maturity 
-increases - and can be made available only to their known friends until then.
+of young teenagers and especially k-12 organisations. 
 
 Every person on Mistpark has unlimited profiles available to them. There is a 
 "public profile" which can be seen by anybody. Additional profiles may be