From 2394ad69a4b5055a282ea978eed506ebef68cef9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ben Orenstein <ben.orenstein@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 19 Feb 2011 18:07:00 -0500
Subject: Edit a few lines for readability.

---
 railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile')

diff --git a/railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile b/railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile
index 535a048b3b..788c243d2a 100644
--- a/railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile
+++ b/railties/guides/source/active_support_core_extensions.textile
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Thus, after a simple require like:
 require 'active_support'
 </ruby>
 
-objects do not even respond to +blank?+, let's see how to load its definition.
+objects do not even respond to +blank?+. Let's see how to load its definition.
 
 h5. Cherry-picking a Definition
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ h5. Loading Grouped Core Extensions
 
 The next level is to simply load all extensions to +Object+. As a rule of thumb, extensions to +SomeClass+ are available in one shot by loading +active_support/core_ext/some_class+.
 
-Thus, if that would do, to have +blank?+ available we could just load all extensions to +Object+:
+Thus, to load all extensions to +Object+ (including +blank?+):
 
 <ruby>
 require 'active_support/core_ext/object'
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ h4. +require_library_or_gem+
 
 The convenience method +require_library_or_gem+ tries to load its argument with a regular +require+ first. If it fails loads +rubygems+ and tries again.
 
-If the first attempt is a failure and +rubygems+ can't be loaded the method raises +LoadError+. On the other hand, if +rubygems+ is available but the argument is not loadable as a gem, the method gives up and +LoadError+ is also raised.
+If the first attempt is a failure and +rubygems+ can't be loaded the method raises +LoadError+. A +LoadError+ is also raised if +rubygems+ is available but the argument is not loadable as a gem.
 
 For example, that's the way the MySQL adapter loads the MySQL library:
 
@@ -503,7 +503,7 @@ Model attributes have a reader, a writer, and a predicate. You can alias a model
 <ruby>
 class User < ActiveRecord::Base
   # let me refer to the email column as "login",
-  # much meaningful for authentication code
+  # possibly meaningful for authentication code
   alias_attribute :login, :email
 end
 </ruby>
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