From 9a03834cefca5026057b2316c52c2b71e0d07f49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mike Macgirvin <mike@macgirvin.com>
Date: Sun, 19 Sep 2010 20:52:39 -0700
Subject: simplify wording throughout application to concepts which do not need
 explanations.

---
 view/dfrn_request.tpl | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'view/dfrn_request.tpl')

diff --git a/view/dfrn_request.tpl b/view/dfrn_request.tpl
index 483cf6a6f..0b02982d8 100644
--- a/view/dfrn_request.tpl
+++ b/view/dfrn_request.tpl
@@ -1,15 +1,16 @@
 
-<h1>Personal Introduction</h1>
+<h1>Friend/Connection Request</h1>
 
 <p id="dfrn-request-intro">
-You may introduce yourself to this member if you have a valid profile locator<br />
-on the <a href="http://dfrn.org">Distributed Friends and Relations Network (DFRN)</a>.
+You may request a connection with this member if you have a valid profile address<br />
+on one of the following social networks:<br />
+<ul id="dfrn-request-networks"><li><a href="http://dfrn.org">mistpark/DFRN</a></li></ul>
 </p>
 
 <form action="dfrn_request/$nickname" method="post" />
 
 <div id="dfrn-request-url-wrapper" >
-	<label id="dfrn-url-label" for="dfrn-url" >Your profile location:</label>
+	<label id="dfrn-url-label" for="dfrn-url" >Your profile address:</label>
 	<input type="text" name="dfrn_url" id="dfrn-url" size="32" />
 	<div id="dfrn-request-url-end"></div>
 </div>
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