From 24371126701c09bc501a92fa51c2b214dd5ba898 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: friendica Date: Wed, 5 Mar 2014 17:43:17 -0800 Subject: minor readability changes --- assets/home.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'assets') diff --git a/assets/home.html b/assets/home.html index bac67dffc..4ff5c15eb 100644 --- a/assets/home.html +++ b/assets/home.html @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ $(document).ready(function() {
Dream it. Do it.
-The RedMatrix (aka "red") is a highly advanced social network which was created by a farmer in Australia - that grew disgusted by the lack of privacy and the increasing tendency of foreign corporations and governments to monitor and control the internet. This has strangled and subverted all that was once good about the web - and turned it into a steaming pile of crap. (Aussies typically don't mince words.) +The RedMatrix (aka "red") is a highly advanced social networking platform which was created by a farmer in Australia - that grew disgusted by the lack of privacy and the increasing tendency of foreign corporations and governments to monitor and control the internet. This has strangled and subverted all that was once good about the web - and turned it into a "steaming pile of crap". (Aussies typically don't mince words.)

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-Taking cues from life in the Aussie outback, the Red Matrix has no central authority. Each channel (or social profile) is independent and autonomous - and controls their privacy as they see fit. Some will want more privacy, some less. They can do this - unlike your typical social network, the matrix has no say in their decision and cannot subvert it. Server hubs are self-sufficient and the network will continue to function if any single node in the matrix goes offline. It also provides channel resilience. You can "clone" your identity (social profile) to any hub in the network and carry on without interruption if your primary server goes wonky for an hour - or a week. (No fail whale needed here.) +Taking cues from life in the Aussie outback, the Red Matrix has no central authority. Each channel (or social profile) is independent and autonomous - and controls their privacy as they see fit. Some will want more privacy, some less. They can do this, as unlike your typical social network - the matrix has no say in their decision and cannot subvert it. Server hubs are self-sufficient and the network will continue to function if any single node in the matrix goes offline. It also provides channel resilience. You can "clone" your identity (social profile) to any hub in the network and carry on without interruption if your primary server goes wonky for an hour - or a week. (No fail whale needed here.)

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