From 6f11c20bf2d1e0b06a757ce21df951d789a382e2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Mike Macgirvin Date: Wed, 13 Oct 2010 06:13:37 -0700 Subject: updated readme --- README | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/README b/README index 693d3ecba..fcf73e176 100644 --- a/README +++ b/README @@ -18,11 +18,11 @@ those you wish to share them with. Period. -Mistpark is secure and as private as you wish it to be. Privacy settings are -straight-forward and simple, because we know that relationships rarely are +Mistpark is secure, and as private as you wish it to be. Our privacy settings +are straight-forward and simple, because we know that relationships rarely are (straight-forward and simple). Whether you're communicating with drinking -buddies or potential employers, you can rest assured that each can only see -the side of you that you wish to present. +buddies or potential employers, you can rest assured that each is only able to +see the side of you that you wish to present. A single instance of Mistpark Server supports up to several hundred people using commodity hosting hardware. Each of these people can connect with any -- cgit v1.2.3